[☆ Repair My Heart || ☆ PDF Read by ✓ Zeoanne] #2020


  • Title: Repair My Heart
  • Author: Zeoanne
  • ISBN: -
  • Page: 331
  • Format: ebook

  • Repair My Heart By Zeoanne Chad is a mechanic, a lonely man forced to hide his sexuality from the intolerant people in his town Takoda is a satellite repairman still troubled by a past abusive relationship When Chad called to get his satellite fixed, he never expected someone as beautiful as Takoda to show up Can Chad fix Takoda s broken heart Can Takoda repair than just Chad s satellite ThChad is a mechanic, a lonely man forced to hide his sexuality from the intolerant people in his town Takoda is a satellite repairman still troubled by a past abusive relationship When Chad called to get his satellite fixed, he never expected someone as beautiful as Takoda to show up Can Chad fix Takoda s broken heart Can Takoda repair than just Chad s satellite This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love Has No Boundaries event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.
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    Commentaires:

    Virginia
    I liked that we got some blue collar guys and some racial diversity in this LHNB short.

    Zeoanne
    A Note to Readers I wasn t half way through writing this story when I received some very sad bad news and I enter a deep depression About three days before the due date I receive some encouraging messages from those who know me on FB wanting for me to finish it What I ended up giving you wasn t what I had planned I did rush to reach the end but, again, it s not what I intended to write The original story was much longer than what I gave you and for that, I apologize I ll try and do better next t [...]

    LutaWolf
    An enjoyable chocolate read A simple boy meet boy, date, buy house but it s a well told story.

    Julesmarie
    For a first published story, this wasn t bad The author took on quite a challenge dealing with prior relationship abuse AND homophobia in a story this short.The characters, however, were interesting even if the dialogue was stilted and awkward.I wish the author much luck as she continues developing her craft, I ll be keeping my eye out for of her work And WOW is the picture from the prompt hot

    K
    LHNB Story released 15.7.13A story about a mechanic, closeted due to his homophobic workmates and the small town in which he lived meeting a Native American satellite repair man and the start of their relationship This story had a lot of promise, but jumped around a bit too much in the narrative for me to really enjoy it.

    Parker Williams
    This was a sweet read, especially for a first time story I think Zeoanne did a great job with the two very sexy characters.

    Victoria
    Sweet story Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter Thank you Zeoanne for donating your story, your time and your talent.

    Deanna Against Censorship
    Cute short story that addresses a serious subject but incompletely Nice characters but not fully developed This is like a quick synopsis for a longer story.

    Silkeeeeee
    Star rating says enough.

    Rachel Emily
    This was very sweet It was on the short side, so some things seemed a bit rushed for me, but I enjoyed it Thank you

    Kathleen
    2.5 stars

    Nic
    This was a super short but nice story.Although it was a short story, it felt a little rushed, trying to get too much into a short space The issues were only touched on and the story just skimmed the surface of the relationship However the characters were really likable and I was so pleased to see them get their happy ending.The ending did feel a little like the neat summary from a children s fairy tale view spoiler And that was that Chad sold the house and they bought some acreage outside of Ric [...]

    Alex
    Kudos to the author for writing her first story and putting it out there for people to read Unfortunately, this story doesn t work for me Firstly, the conversations don t feel real it s like the characters are reading from a script For example the long conversation at the end and when Takoda explains his experience of being abused Secondly, the way the third person perspective changes throughout the story is quite confusing Lastly, the story feels rushed It can do with words to give meat to th [...]

    Samantha
    I wish I had a wordy reason for this but quite simply, I just wasn t a fan of this It felt a bit too juvenile to me in some parts, and that only served to irritate me I certainly appreciate the authors efforts though, and if you re looking for a super sweet short story, this may be for you.

    Andrew Gordon
    Nice, happy little story I appreciate that you took the chance to put yourself out there for the world to read For a first story, you did great And I do love me a HEA ending, even if I can t seem to write one of my own P

    Aya
    Sorry to say, I wasn t a fan I found it all too rushed one minute the MC is worried about being out in a town that has low tolerance but the next minute he is telling a stranger how gorgeous he is, and then there is the ending that seemed too hastily written.

    Janie
    Nice first story Its too bad this was for Love Has No Boundaries because this would have the potential to be a great long book, possibly a series I wanted Good job

    Tailtiu
    2,5

    Lila Hunter
    The story felt a little unrealistic.

    Mandy*reads obsessively*
    Another sweet story from the LHNB event and the author s first published story.This is a sweet fast little read Hearts and rainbows and cupcakes, great for between heavier and angsty reads.

    Annika
    Kudos to the new author and I m sure experiences will improve her writing and story telling Keep on writing

    Sarah
    It was a cute story but it seemed like a kid wrote it Words were repeated in sentences and the dialogue was weird Hopefully the author gets better.

    Misty
    Nice little story Thank you Zeoanne

    Jilrene ♥
    2.5 stars

    Seiran
    This was a cute and sweet story, and I thought the author did a great job, being it is her first published story.

    V
    Even when it felt like a horse racing of how fast everything happened, I still loved it.

    Rissa (an M/M kinda Girl!!)
    For a first time storyI think it was good It had some parts that would have made for a wonderful full length story Thanks for taking the time to write for us

    Lucy
    Congratulations to the author on first published work

    Melanie~~
    A quick, easy short Nice NOTE I rate most writing event stories free reads 4 or 5 stars because of my appreciation of the author s participation.

    Cathy Brockman
    This is a very sweet story I loved how the two men found each othr and connected I like the little bit in the bar scene if you like sweet romances with a little heat this one is a good one

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